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brock.sampson
10-20-2008, 05:26 PM
First shot at a theme. Let me know what you think.

miguelsluma
10-21-2008, 12:56 AM
I think all but the title looks really great!
perhaps you can make it stand out a bit more.. use a stroke perhaps or something else

brock.sampson
10-21-2008, 06:34 AM
I'll try and make a few new titles tonight with different color strokes.

brock.sampson
10-22-2008, 05:57 PM
New main logo. Spotlights ease in from left and right and then hover. Guys ease in from right.

hollywood
10-22-2008, 06:06 PM
Looks good but I find the title and the background blend too much with each other.

brock.sampson
10-22-2008, 07:32 PM
How about something like this instead? I still need to finish the dark blue background around the video.

tolomame
10-22-2008, 11:03 PM
I have a high quality marquee if you're interested in using it at all.

brock.sampson
10-23-2008, 03:11 AM
Sure let me know where I can download it or you can pm it to me.

bent98
10-23-2008, 04:10 AM
I like the first attempt better

Goalies Rule
10-23-2008, 06:40 AM
Yeah I like the 1st as well. I thought the yellow title looked pretty good, better than the red since it blended too much

bodydump
10-23-2008, 09:50 AM
Agreed, I like the first one. Maybe brighten the yellow so it stands out more. Or give it a pulse animation or something so its more obvious. Good work...I like the spotlight effect.

brock.sampson
10-26-2008, 05:46 PM
Updated with pretty much new everything. Used marquee image from tolomame to get mobo, robo, and logo. Did the background over and made spotlights bigger. Logo sweep left, guys ease from right, spotlights fade and then hover. Let me know what you think.

Thanks again to tolomame for the marquee image worked much better than originals I was working from.

bent98
10-26-2008, 06:10 PM
Its alot cleaner

mildanti
10-26-2008, 09:38 PM
Wow looks totally different from the first, great job

miguelsluma
10-27-2008, 01:05 AM
looks much much better!

hollywood
10-27-2008, 09:25 AM
I like it alot!

Rama
10-27-2008, 01:18 PM
If you don't mind a suggestion, I think the spotlights are covering up the best art in the theme. Not sure if thats still true with the hover. But maybe lighter spotlights or moving them behind the characters or something? That's my opinion anyway.

Other than that it looks nice, keep it up :D

Dazz
10-27-2008, 01:44 PM
Make the spotlights a bit transparent and put them on their own artwork layer over the guys. Then you can give spotlights the hover animation in the same area where the guys are. This way it will look like the search lights are looking for the guys.

brock.sampson
10-27-2008, 01:50 PM
I think those are artwork 3 and 4, not sure I'm still at work. I'll make some new spotlights that are more transparent. Spotlights currently fade from left and right and then hover. I'll put up an updated screen shot when I get home.

brock.sampson
10-27-2008, 03:58 PM
Updated screeny with smaller and more transparent spotlights.

brock.sampson
10-28-2008, 01:46 PM
If nobody has any other suggestions I'm going to upload this one.

miguelsluma
10-28-2008, 01:55 PM
looks great! go for it