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MoANImloT
09-04-2008, 03:11 AM
What i'm wotking on :

http://stephane.neuville.free.fr/gberet.jpg

Any comment, help or idea is welcome !!!

Thanks.

billpa
09-04-2008, 05:03 AM
Great first draft! I am curious if that diagonal double line is part of the character or a separate layer. If its a separate layer, move it behind the charcter. If its not, I guess you are stuck with it being on top. I would make the logo bigger if possible and bump it up more. I would also bump up the video. Let the konami logo overlap it a bit. This game has a lot of negative space up top so you wont be missing any action. Video might need to be scaled down a smidge.

I think thats it. Good work!

MoANImloT
09-04-2008, 05:35 AM
The double line, is a part of the character, as well as the logo, i will have a lot of work to try to separate the logo and the character, but i'll try !!!

I'm going back under Photoshop, and post an evolution soon (i jope).

Thanks a lot !!!

MoANImloT
09-04-2008, 07:03 AM
A new version (it was faster than expected) !!!

http://stephane.neuville.free.fr/gberetb.jpg

I'm waiting for other remarks, ideas, comments !

Thanks !

BadBoyBill
09-04-2008, 08:43 AM
The video in this theme is way to big, it takes up about 80 percent of the theme. I'd at least half the size of it. Besides that the art looks cool, I remember this game I think, but I thought it was called Russn'Attack, is this a clone or parent?

MoANImloT
09-04-2008, 09:09 AM
OK i'll try to reduce it !!!

I think Russn'Attack is a clone, i was playing this game when i was young on my Amstrad CPC 6128 !!!

Regards.

BadBoyBill
09-04-2008, 09:15 AM
Russn' Attack was hard to me when I was a kid, dont think I got passed the second level, I so forgot about this game, I cant wait to try it again. Thanks for the theme.

The Loafer
09-04-2008, 09:23 AM
I Rush'n Attack: USA release
Green Beret: Everywhere else

... I think

MoANImloT
09-04-2008, 10:06 AM
Yes i think you're right !!!

My last version :

http://stephane.neuville.free.fr/gberetc.jpg

amchine
09-04-2008, 10:12 AM
That looks pretty good! Nice work.

MoANImloT
09-04-2008, 10:41 AM
Thanks a lot !!!

billpa
09-04-2008, 10:51 AM
That looks better. I think the video could go higher and to the right some more so there is some more overlapping and it will be balanced a bit more. I would say around 40 pixels more to the right and 60 pixels more to the top. I did a quick chop job to show you what I mean. You dont have to do it though. looks good already.

BadBoyBill
09-04-2008, 11:00 AM
can u do one with the russn attack logo please

MoANImloT
09-04-2008, 11:52 AM
To BBB : I'll try, need to find good artwork !!!

To Billpa : i'll try this to, and see wich one i prefer !!!

But it's time for me to get some rest, see you tomorrow !!!

Edit : I've found some pretty good artwork, need some work, but wait and see !

Dazz
09-05-2008, 03:57 AM
I have approved this theme.

MoANImloT
09-05-2008, 05:54 AM
Thanks Dazz !!!

I've made an other one for BadBoyBill : Rush'n Attack (it's a clone of Green Beret) :

http://stephane.neuville.free.fr/rushatck.jpg

I've open a new thread for this one !!!

BadBoyBill
09-05-2008, 10:21 AM
Ah, hell ya , thanks dude.

MoANImloT
09-05-2008, 11:47 AM
You're welcome !!!